A really good pitch, its a shame the music failed to export properly, I think the idea is strong and the style is good!
The idea for your magazine is really good. The images portray the genre well and it clearly all works. I think your design will look very good at the end.
I like your ideas and the name 'The Vine' I think it represents a good style of indie/alternative music, which you have shown will be presented in a minimalistic way. However I think you could go in to more depth when explaining your inspiration for the cover, contents and double page spread.
The overall idea for your magazine works very well. I like the title that you have chosen as it's different and links with your genre. The end product will look great.
Your images represent your style well, however, the lack of music does mean that the genre isn't as clear as it could be. overall it does suit your target audience effectively.
I like all your ideas, they give a clear idea of how you want your magazine to be. It's a shame that the music doesn't work.
Although the lack of music doesn't make your target audience/genera clear, i think your idea could do really well.
Your target market and important information is made clear in your pitch, music would make it more appealing but the overall style of your magazine is very good.
Very inspiring pitch, its a shame that it had no sound.
Very original pitch idea but without the music it doesn't make it very clear with what your genre actually is.
Maybe adding music will help with the genre of your magazine, however from images you can get an idea of what it is.
Good pitch. I think use of music would have made the pitch a little better as it would express the genre of your music magazine.
I think maybe the price of your magazine is too cheap for every three months for it to effectively 'pay off'. Maybe at £3 or £4 would be better.
Good ideas, lots of relevant photos, maybe a more expensive magazine though? Also you could add a song that is from your chosen genre over the top to improve the pitch.
I think your magazine name is really creative